New XvsZ comic

[Bento180]

well I finally got round to it. I keep making em if you guys like them

[SPOT]

i don't get it. :|

[kyzen]

I DO!











nah... i don't either... how shit :)

[*NoN*Da]rY*]

well done..... except its like a poor rip off of Chef Brian from Ctrl+alt+del.

[Moo]

Originally posted by SPOT
i don't get it. :|

But i bet Bento's mum gets it nightly from you right?


EDIT: I agree with J's post below. Nice graphs, just add more plot/funny

[Joshu]

Nice art.

Try doing something more interesting in regards to plot.

[Holloway]

NICE

[Eoin]

what the hell is going on?

[mudgie]

That's like what I saw when I ate the mushrooms growing in my shower.

[citizen-X]

comics that make sense kthx

[beauby]

well it looks cool to me

[Bento180]

Originally posted by *NoN*Da]rY*
well done..... except its like a poor rip off of Chef Brian from Ctrl+alt+del.

HAH!!! I wasnt intentionally trying to come off as chef brian cos that guy says random crap...unless thats what you think the comic is coming off as... shit. maybe i need a writer?
Uh yeah i pulled that one from my ass sorry about that one I'll try and make it more LAN related with my next one.

oh and thanks for your comment Moo, you bastard, tho I will take your advice and if comics arent for me than i always have photoshopping to fall back on right spot?

thanx for the comments and so I will improve for the next one.

[Joshu]

Originally posted by Bento180
i always have photoshopping to fall back on

Not from what I saw. I'd stick to drawing comics if I were you.

[Bento180]

Originally posted by Joshu
Not from what I saw. I'd stick to drawing comics if I were you.

damn... i might have to improve my skills there too. but ya gotta admit i didnt do to bad since the pimps body used to be a chicks.

[mudgie]

Okay, Bento, we seemed to have struck a nerve, so I'll offer you constructive critism. Your artwork is nice, and you're talented at drawing and Photoshop - but your comic didn't make one single molecule of sense to me. I wouldn't say it's a rip off of Chef Brian, because any dumb fuck can string together a series of words that no one understands (not calling you names, however).

You should try the ol' punchline approach; think of something mildly funny and do that. It doesn't even have to be very funny, because Garfield still gets published daily.

[Wizzard]

Bento really dude WTF!!?
Is this your private reality or something?

Who's a good drawer contact me next lanx.

Wizzard <-------- cannot draw

On a mental note I think this just might start a comp -.-

hint hint